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This blog is just to record my experience of writing a story. That is something I have wanted to do all my life. I guess it is now or never.

I am just doing it for fun. I do not really intend to publish it. Mind you, I shall give that a try if I ever get it finished :).

The blog is only intended for me to keep a diary of my thoughts and for some of my close friends, especially those at the Richmond Writers' Circle (bless them for their patience).

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If you are, like me, attempting to write your first novel, please share the ups and downs.

Sunday, 21 October 2012

Chapter 1 Scene 6

Chapter 1 Scene 6 (V1.0)

The Gentlemen Rankers leave Deolali by airship.I don't suppose that there can be a steampunk story without an airship. In this scene I have mine. In the previous scene Kitchener mentions looking at the German positions from a balloon and this has confused some readers. He did this in 1870 not in 1914. He was a volunteer medic with the French army at the time. These Victorians certainly got around.


I expect that steampunk balloons owe much to Jules Verne's Phineus Fogg, shown rather splendidly in this pic. Actually he never used a balloon in the novel only in films based on the novel. But these are engraved in everyone's memories.






I want to include a pic of David Niven here - an actor who would truly have enjoyed a steampunk movie and the only one, as fas as I know)  to portray a gentleman ranker. (In the Guns of Naverone).

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