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This blog is just to record my experience of writing a story. That is something I have wanted to do all my life. I guess it is now or never.

I am just doing it for fun. I do not really intend to publish it. Mind you, I shall give that a try if I ever get it finished :).

The blog is only intended for me to keep a diary of my thoughts and for some of my close friends, especially those at the Richmond Writers' Circle (bless them for their patience).

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If you are, like me, attempting to write your first novel, please share the ups and downs.

Thursday, 17 January 2013

Rewrites and Stewart Ferris

A while ago I saw this at the Saltaire Bookshop in Bradford and didn't buy it because I thought I'd be able to pick it up anywhere. I couldn't. So I was jolly pleased it was still there when I went back last week. The reason I wanted it was because I was attracted by the approach it offered for re-writes. I'm a person who needs a very structured approach to follow and Stewart Ferris offered a ten step one which appealed to me. At the moment I'm on the first version of his scheme. The full list is:


1 An approximation of the whole work
2 Tightening the structure
3 Development of the characters
4 Improving the dialogue
5 Working on the language and imagery
6 Restructuring parts of the work
7 Adding layers of conflict
8 Improving the crucial opening passage
9 More work on character development
10 Proofreading

The danger is, of course, that there is an inevitable tendency to put off things to a subsequent re-write that should be done now. But, if I guard against this, I think that it will keep me focused on the immediate task. At the moment it is to grind on until I have a story to work on. I hope when it comes to the next rewrite I shall not have such a mess with the plot that the task is too herculean. So far I don't think it is too bad but there is no doubt it gets harder as I go. 
I'm going to use the above numbering system for my scene structure first digit, so it helps there too.

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