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This blog is just to record my experience of writing a story. That is something I have wanted to do all my life. I guess it is now or never.

I am just doing it for fun. I do not really intend to publish it. Mind you, I shall give that a try if I ever get it finished :).

The blog is only intended for me to keep a diary of my thoughts and for some of my close friends, especially those at the Richmond Writers' Circle (bless them for their patience).

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If you are, like me, attempting to write your first novel, please share the ups and downs.

Thursday, 22 November 2012

Chapter 3 Scene 1.1

Back to the Gentlemen Rankers themselves who have now arrived in Algeria.
Chapter 3 Scene 1.1

Apparently this is what Algeria looks like - with camels of course.

I'm very partial to camels - not to the extent of riding one or even going near one but somehow they are a wonderful combination of the noble and the comical.

I was determined that they should be in the story somewhere.

Perhaps my scene would look like this.












The camels in Weeping Camel aside from being the wrong sort were very lovely - just not for the four hours that the film seemed to drag on for.




I S Johar would have to be my casting for the guide. Actually he was Indian but was for many years a sort of all purpose dusky foreigner in British Movies. I remember him particularly in North West Frontier. That portrayal was criticized by the politically correct as being a characterture. George MacDonald Fraser retorted that anyone who had been to India at that time and for years afterwards would instantly recognise the person played.


The town of  Ain Sefra was surprisingly well represented on Google. It is a bit grander than I showed it. I was only guessing. I might change a few things come the rewrite.

















Probably too many but I couldn't resist putting them all in.


 Thinking more about the gentlemen rankers themselves here are three more pictures I muse over




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